Thursday, November 8, 2012

Vagina Dentata *sneak peek*

*Not the best writer but I tried my best, hope you like it*

Queens, New York

Onika Maraj is a 17 year old spokesperson for a christian abstinence group called Queens Promise. She attends groups with her two friends Cassi and Wayne.

After giving a speech about the purity ring worn by members of the group, she is introduced to a boy named Drake, she finds him to be a hunk.
Wayne, Cassi, Onika, & Drake begin going on group dates.
Onika often fantasizes about marrying Drake & although they both are attracted to each other, they agree they cannot see each other.
One day they renege & meet at a local swimming hole.
After there swim they go in a cave to get warm & Drake begins kissing Onika.
Onika was enjoying it at first but Drake was becoming to aggressive & shakes Onika, she hits her head on the ground.
Onika is dazed, so Drake takes this opportunity to begin removing her bathing suit bottoms. He succeeds & begins to put his penis inside Onika.
Onika attempts to fight Drake but freezes when she hears a crunch sound & Drake cry out in pain...

purity ring




swimming hole

*DUN DUN DUN!! what happened?? I know its short & again I am no writer but I thought I would try this out,
hope you enjoyed this sneak peek plse plse follow @Rayebaby92TM I have like no followers lol smh sad rite I know newho I'm gone til next time*


  1. Yooo, what happened???? You cant just leave me lost right here. Damn. Post the rest soon

  2. Wait what? What happend? Safaree came and hit him, didn't he? Anywho post the rest like ASAP

  3. I swear when I saw the title I did a double take lol I was like what? XD OMG though! I need to know what that crunch was ://
    Post sooooon! This is very different! I need more! XD

  4. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww hell naw DF? I wonder what happened to his ass. Whatever it was he deserves it

  5. Why would you leave it right there this was amazing and you stop it at first I was like wait I thought this was onikafaree until I kept reading and I was like ok this is not a dricki story he basically rapped her but anyHOE post soon -proud_of_nicki

  6. POST ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. The crunch was the teeth in her vagina Drake's penis has been cut off now. This is an exact replica of the movie Teeth only difference is the name changes. No need for anticipation blah

    1. Lmao your rite these r based off movies & stuff, thnx 4 ruining the anticipation lol

  8. Wow ain't whoever that is being a dickhead and ruining the story! Anyway I want the rest, just change it up so nobody know ur using different stuff from movies.